Wednesday, March 23, 2011 | Writer's Wall
My Dream Car
My car is orange and black with blue tyres. It has a black and orange front windscreen and bright lights.
My car can speed and drift and it can drive really fast on the roads.
My dream car is special to me because it's new and I'm the only person who would have this car.
By Raniera
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Wednesday, March 16, 2011 | Writer's Wall
We have all been learning how to write a character description. Loni used his plan to help him turn his ideas into sentences. He hopes you enjoy reading his description of Kelly.
Kelly is a teacher aide at Tamaki Primary School. She works in Room 7. She reads funny stories and plays Maths games. Kelly likes helping the children. Kelly has blonde hair. She always has a pony tail. Kelly has blue eyes and a big smile. Kelly looks after me and helps me.
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Thursday, February 24, 2011 | Writer's Wall
The Christchurch Earthquake
The earthquake is horrible and the people are scared. I feel shocked because some people died and the buildings got damaged. Lots of kind people are helping to rescue the hurt people. I hope Christchurch is alright.
By Loni
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Making Butter
Wednesday, September 22, 2010 | Writer's Wall
Beautiful has written an imaginary recount... read on to find out what she was up to.
It was a hot day. I felt unhappy churning the butter. It took such a long long time. I got sweaty and it was dripping down my cheeks. My hands were aching so I asked my Mum if I could go to the lake so I could cool down. She said "Just stay there and do it!"
I could see people going past and children having fun playing. All I was doing was churning the butter at home. I felt jealous when all the other children went past so I turned and looked the other way.
At last I could hear that bubbling sound. I knew that it was done. I looked inside, it looked so creamy. I had bread with the butter I made. It tasted fantastic. After I finished eating I ran to the lake. On the way to the lake I was singing. When I finally got there I kicked off my shoes and jumped in.
By Beautiful
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Tuesday, September 14, 2010 | Writer's Wall
Bad Jelly the Witch
Bad Jelly the witch is an evil old woman with a personality that is as nasty as rotten eggs. She picks on little children and is as cruel as an oviraptor stealing eggs. Her huge black wart and hairy legs are as ugly as the Grinch. She has rotten teeth and breath that smells as bad as a thousand cows letting out unpleasant air.
Helem
Bad Jelly the Witch is an evil cruel lady. Her personality is as nasty as mouldy cheese. She smells like an unflushed school toilet. Bad Jelly is as ugly as a warty old toad. She has rotten crooked teeth and her breath smells like week old dinner. Her long scrappy hair and red staring eyes make Bad Jelly horrible on the inside and the outside!
Heaven
Bad Jelly is a nasty wicked witch with a personality that is as disgusting as a frog eating flies. She has long squiggly hair and a nose that is as pointy as a pine tree. Her black rotten teeth are falling out and her breath smells as bad as manure that has been left on the ground for four thousand years. Bad Jelly loves to eat innocent children for breakfast which makes her mean as well.
Veisinia
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Loni and the Octopus
Monday, September 13, 2010 | Writer's Wall
Loni has written a narrative about his imaginary adventure with an octopus. He has learnt to use connectives to join ideas together. Click the play button to listen to him read his story and see if you can hear the connectives he has used.
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Fishing... A Recount by Zaiden
Tuesday, August 24, 2010 | Writer's Wall
I was waiting in class excited to go to the wharf. I felt nervous. When we got to the hall I looked around. I could see all the other kid's lines and bait catchers. It took ages to get out of the hall because the teachers kept on talking. The senior syndicate all lined up outside and began our walk. The long walk to the wharf was exhausting. I could see the smiles on all the kids faces and could hear the laughter when Mr Saili got out of his car. I thought it was cool that he came fishing with us. The wharf looked kind of small and I was surprised it fit all of us on it. I was freezing but excited at the same time when I lowered my line slowly into the water.
Next I waited and waited, the waiting got a little boring. I saw Osaiasi's bait catcher fly away and wave goodbye to him. He got frustrated but he laughed. I felt sorry for him. I walked over to get some bait. It smelt putrid. It was like the bait just disappeared into the water! Time was flying by as we were having fun. Then the time had come to finish and Mr Lintott said "Lines in kids!"
I was amazed I caught nothing. I had an awesome day and I felt tired from all the fishing and playing around. Our classes formed two lines and marched back to school. It was so muddy walking across the rugby fields. I was glad I had shoes! I washed my hands when we got back but the smell of bait just wouldn't go away.
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