Hi Ma'asi, I have just been listening to your report and I really enjoyed learning all kinds of interesting details about penguins. You not only had a wealth of information, but you shared it with such a clear speaking voice. Sometimes I see penguins out on the harbour here when we go out on our boat. Keep up the great writing. Mrs Burt
Hi Ma'asi. We have been doing information reports too. We like your facts and your use of technical language. We think you really understand what it takes to write a good information report.
We really liked your information report. You were confident and we were able to understand your report because your voice was clear. It really hooked us in! It was very interesting and you used lots of different sentence starters.
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Hi Ma'asi, I have just been listening to your report and I really enjoyed learning all kinds of interesting details about penguins. You not only had a wealth of information, but you shared it with such a clear speaking voice. Sometimes I see penguins out on the harbour here when we go out on our boat.
Keep up the great writing.
Mrs Burt
Hi Ma'asi. We have been doing information reports too. We like your facts and your use of technical language. We think you really understand what it takes to write a good information report.
Well done !
Room 13
High five Ma'asi!
We really liked your information report. You were confident and we were able to understand your report because your voice was clear. It really hooked us in! It was very interesting and you used lots of different sentence starters.
Well done!
From Room 8 :)
Brenda Vaughan, England
Wow - what a confident speaker you are. It was a pleasure to listen to your report.
Tally Perry, Australia
Well done, what a great report. You obviously know what you are talking about. I look forward to your next report.
Ma'asi - what a lot of information. You spoke very clearly and presented your facts well. I look forward to your next post!
you have some cool facts maasi
by felicity mei
good work Maasi
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