Thursday, February 24, 2011 | Writer's Wall
The Christchurch Earthquake
The earthquake is horrible and the people are scared. I feel shocked because some people died and the buildings got damaged. Lots of kind people are helping to rescue the hurt people. I hope Christchurch is alright.
By Loni
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I am so proud of you Loni. You thought carefully about your sentences and tried really hard to use powerful words and check your work all by yourself.
Keep trying hard with your writing!
Mrs A :-)
You are SO RIGHT Loni, the earthquake is horrible, people are still scared and lots of people are helping - did you know my dad took a plane to Christchurch last week to help deliver milk? He said it was very scary!
I hope Christchurch is alright too.
Fantastic writing Loni!
From Miss Kyla in Room 8.
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